Monday, January 28, 2008

Nose to the Grindstone

Let me explain....Bob and I went to a fund raiser at a neighboring town on Saturday and as we were leaving and walking down the dark sidewalk, I managed to hit a patch of ice. Since it was
chilly out I had put my hands in my pockets of my jacket. So when I fell I first went to my knees and then forward, landing right on my face. It was as if in slow motion and I remember thinking as my face made contact with the cold concrete, " Oh, man! This is going to leave a mark!" The picture is the result of face to concrete contact...ouch!
Bob, being a man of few words and a clever sense of humor told me the next day that I really know how to put my nose to the grindstone...HA, HA, HA!
Anyway, I don't think the nose is broken although it hurts pretty bad and feels like I have sinus headache and need to sneeze all the time. I'm sure the wound will heal soon(probably faster than my pride) and I will remember the advice of my maternal grandfather who always warned his kids not to walk with their hands in their pockets on ice!
No new news regarding the Amazon.com contest. Reviews are being posted and I thank those of you who have taken the time to do so. Be sure to click on my site (to the right...VOTE HERE) and read through the reviews and comments if you are able.

Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Reviews: Take in the good...learn from the bad - 4 stars and holding!

The reviews I've been waiting for are now posted at http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00124COO8 the site of The Scrapbook. Always keep in mind that these are just one person's opinion. Wish I could say the Publisher's Weekly review was shining...it wasn't. It wasn't even helpful. Actually I wonder if the reviewer even fully read the whole manuscripts as they seemed to miss the whole point of the story. It isn't an exciting story but it is a very tender, touching and thoughtful love story. Think I somehow offended them with the name of the cat in the book...Prince Snarls and the fact that the story had Christian conversation between characters (not a sermon in the book...I promise!) Anyway here is their review:

manuscript review by Publishers Weekly, an independent organizationThe only point in this story where something reasonably exciting happens is when the cat — named loosely after England’s Prince Charles — dies. This happens on 113, nowhere near where the climax of the action should be. Never mind that it’s a cat. Broken-hearted from losing her fiancĂ© in a motorcycling accident, Glenda is lonely and sad. She finds a thrift store scrapbook and pores over Betty Ann Christiansen’s record of her trip from Nebraska to Southern California many years ago. At this point you may think the novel’s going to be a knock-off of "The Notebook," but surprisingly little has to do with the actual scrapbook, though the perspective does shift back and forth: from Glenda reading it to Betty Ann’s recollections, as she sits in a nursing home, recovering from a stroke. Her loving son Mark visits often. Glenda searches for answers at church, and goes on a weekend retreat with the church group … where she sees Mark (!) who is, of course, interested in her. A priest cat-sitting for Glenda sees the scrapbook, and recognizes himself in a class photo, so he’s involved in things as well. Interspersed throughout are didatic Christian sermons.IDEA: 2 PLOT: 2 CHARACTERS: 2 PROSE: 2 WOW: 2

No other authors had the mumber ratings following their reviews...don't know what that means, but I guess 2 is better than 1 or 0.

Okay, so that was pretty bad. Now for the good reviews from two of Amazon.com's Top Reviewers. They understood where the story was going and all they were able to read was the 5000 word excerpt. Their reviews still give me hope. Here they are:

Amazon Top ReviewerA worthwhile story of a woman who buys an old scrapbook to peruse and the life story that the book tells. This excerpt holds so much promise. The writing is top-notch. The author's transition between past and present is seamlessly, beautifully done. This is a book that I would rank up there with Nicolas Sparks' "The Notebook".

Amazon Top ReviewerThough this type of story is not my cup of tea I can see the appeal. This novel fits well in with books like "Divine Secrets of the Ya Ya Sisterhood." Glenda has found a scrapbook/diary that belonged to someone name Betty Ann. Betty Ann is many miles away in a nursing home after a stroke. The two women are remembering Betty Ann's youth, Betty from memory and Glenda from the diary. A connection is made between them. The writing is well done. There is little dialog in this excerpt, but it isn't needed. A reader will get wrapped up in a life, and wonder, will these two ever meet? Great start.

So there they are...the long awaited big time reviews! I don't know what this means for the fate of The Scrapbook as far as continuing in the contest, but until I hear differently I will assume we are still in the game so , PLEASE POST THOSE REVIEWS IF YOU HAVEN'T ALREADY! This is where your well written reviews can really make a difference. I really appreciate your support and value your opinion.

On another note...I made the front page of the Humphrey Democrat Newspaper today and the Columbus Telegram did a phone interview for their paper. Tell your friends about the contest and take some time to go through some of the other writers' pages...there is some amazing talent out there!

Tuesday, January 22, 2008

Give me understanding....

Psalm 119:25-48
My soul clings to the dust; revive me according to your word. When I told of my ways, you answered me; teach me your statutes. Make me understand the way of your precepts, and I will meditate on your wondrous works. My soul melts away for sorrow; strengthen me according to your word. Put false ways far from me; and graciously teach me your law. I have chosen the way of faithfulness; I set your ordinances before me. I cling to your decrees, O LORD; let me not be put to shame. I run the way of your commandments, for you enlarge my understanding.
Teach me, O LORD, the way of your statutes, and I will observe it to the end. Give me understanding, that I may keep your law and observe it with my whole heart. Lead me in the path of your commandments, for I delight in it. Turn my heart to your decrees, and not to selfish gain. Turn my eyes from looking at vanities; give me life in your ways. Confirm to your servant your promise, which is for those who fear you. Turn away the disgrace that I dread, for your ordinances are good. See, I have longed for your precepts; in your righteousness give me life. Let your steadfast love come to me, O LORD, your salvation according to your promise. Then I shall have an answer for those who taunt me, for I trust in your word. Do not take the word of truth utterly out of my mouth, for my hope is in your ordinances. I will keep your law continually, forever and ever. I shall walk at liberty, for I have sought your precepts. I will also speak of your decrees before kings, and shall not be put to shame; I find my delight in your commandments, because I love them. I revere your commandments, which I love, and I will meditate on your statutes. Amen

Thursday, January 17, 2008

Living the Dream

The dream of becoming a published writer is one shared by many, but accomplished by few. My dream started with an idea to share a part of who I am with others. Initially, I wanted to share my love of drawing with my grandchildren so I wrote and illustrated "The Squiggle Book"; had it spiral bound at an office supply store and diligently sent it to several publishers, who rightfully rejected it. Someday I will reformat it and try again. In the meantime, my grandchildren love it just the way it is.

If one is to write, one must be open to the opportunity to do so. I was at a dinner and overheard a group talking about wanting to find someone to write and illustrate a children's book to present the 150 years of their town. I graciously introduced myself and told them I would be willing to take on the challenge and I would do it free of charge. Many wondered why I would do such a thing, but I knew it would give me the opportunity to finally see my words and illustrations in print. Of course I had to meet with the planning committee and prove to them I was capable of such an endeavor. On our first meeting I already had most of the book completed and some of the rough illustrations created. The book was written in rhyme to keep it fun and interesting for children. It was well received and has been presented throughout that community and across the state. I have done several book signings and especially enjoy doing interactive readings using an old trunk filled with articles represented in the story and involving the audience. It is so much fun! Do I receive a great amount of monetary reward for this service? Well, no...but the pleasure is priceless!

To write one must always take notice of everything around you. I have learned that each circumstance, experience and person in my life can become an inspiration for expression. I used to paint and draw more than I write, but now I write more than the other. Either way it is all the same pleasure. One creates an image on canvas or paper using pencil or paint. The other creates an image in the mind using words.

My first published novel, "Third & Grace" (available at Amazon.com ASIN: 1424160197) was created using many of my own personal experiences and weaving them into a tender fictional story that could very easily be true. A chance encounter with a small publishing company while searching the internet and a well structured query letter earned me the opportunity to be published. I will forever cherish the memory of the excitement I experienced when I received the notice that my manuscript had been accepted and I was offered a publishing contract. It is matched only by the incredible joy I felt when I received the copies of my book and held it for the first time in my hands. To see my words printed in book form and my name on the cover was amazing and a dream come true. Has this book brought me monetary wealth and financial success? Well, no...but I love that it is out there and that others are reading it. I love it that it is enjoyed by those who read it. I love that it has encouraged others in their lives. I love it when they tell me it made them cry and laugh and they couldn't put it down until they finished it. The pleasure from that has made me oh so rich!

Now I am waiting...one of the 836 Semi-Finalists whose manuscript (The Scrapbook)is being considered in the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest. Although I am already a published writer, and have succeeded in my dream of being so...I am still filled with the excitement of this contest and the wonderful opportunities it presents. I am humbled and honored to be among all the amazing talent that is represented through my fellow writers, who are not competitors but companions in this event. Do I want to win? Oh, you bet I do! Is it the most important thing in my life? No, not at all. For when it is all decided, and the prizes are awarded and the honors bestowed, the things I value most will still be all that truly matters...my faith, my family, and my friends.

Wednesday, January 16, 2008

I'M IN...AGAIN - SEMI-FINALIST AMAZON BREAKTHROUGH NOVEL AWARD CONTEST

The news came yesterday as I was at the public library. I had an Art Club meeting and so I had to stay in town after work. I decided to go use the computers at the library to check my email until my meeting time. The computers require a deposit of two quarters which allows you about 15 minutes time. I just kept plugging in those quarters and switching back and fort from email to abna discussion boards. At 6:49pm the email from Amazon came through. I was so scared to read it and went first to the boards to let my fellow writers know I got an email and then the screen went blank! My time was up and naturally I didn't have any more quarters, so I dug frantically through my purse to locate a bill to put in the change machine. All I had was a five and so I ran to the change machine...shaking and crying. The poor kids who were using the computers around me must have thought I was nuts! My hands were shaking so much I had a hard time putting the bill into the machine slot. As the quarters tumbled out into the tray, I snatched them up and ran back to my computer and inserted two into the slot. The screen reappeared and I took a deep breath and said a quick prayer and opened the email. I am in! I am in the next level of the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest. There are 836 excerpts on the sight. My direct link is: http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00124C008 . Please go to the site and read my excerpt from "The Scrapbook" and post your review. Here are some hints form Amazon on what makes a good review:

What Makes A Good Review? In the semifinalist round, we're breaking new ground in our customer reviewing community: this is the first opportunity for customers to play an active role in the publishing process. The criteria for judging an unpublished book are a little bit different from the norm. Keep these pointers in mind as you're reading and remember: your voice counts.
1.Be persuasive. Experts at Penguin will be relying on customer reviews as they prepare to select the finalists, so don't hesitate to tell us what you really think. The reviews that provide the most thorough, thoughtful feedback are the ones that will help Penguin choose the Top Ten.

2.Quantity and quality help. The more reviews you write, and the more helpful each review is, the more likely you are to win one of our three prize packages.

3.Discuss. As with customer reviews for all our products, you can comment on others' excerpt reviews and rate them. Any discussion and activity we see around specific titles will only keep us coming back for more, so feel free to speak up and banter with your peers.

One quick heads-up: Per the contest rules, every excerpt is a maximum of 5,000 words in length. As a result, you may find that excerpts vary in length or end unexpectedly. Consider yourself warned--and happy reading!

I am sooooooooooooooooo excited! Thank you so much for your support!

Monday, January 14, 2008

Today is the day!

The count down is on and today is the day that Amazon will narrow the list of 5000 authors in their Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest to 1000. It is exciting and I feel so blessed to be one of the 5000 considered with my little novel, "The Scrapbook". I will try and post more later in the day. Thank you everyone for your thoughts and prayers. I know in the scheme of things this little contest isn't all that important...but succeeding in this could open so many doors for me personally, which in turn will create so many ways to help others. All I have ever wanted is to use my God-given talents and abilities to do what is good and right and help those I can along the way.

I am trying not to have anxiety while I wait patiently.

Be sure to check out my profile at http://www.amazon.com/gp/pdp/profile/A108IHTR4CY6V6... and thanks again!

Thursday, January 10, 2008

New York, New York...and counting down!

Jody and Aunt Dorothy all smiles in New York City


Dorothy and her friend, Jack at Empire State Building


Dorothy and I outside Radio City Music Hall

Well, the count down is on for the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award. January 14 or 15 those of us who made the initial 5000 will find out if we made the cut to 1000. That is when the exerpts will be posted and Amazon customers will be able to log on and give their input on those manuscripts. So be sure to go to www.amazon.com/abna to give your support to the writers and their work...and be sure to check out "The Scrapbook" my little novel if it makes the cut. I'll be sure to let you know!